From 243560be77db5ad842ee3b2a8c498b8ab8a686a4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Fabrice Henrion Date: Wed, 7 Sep 2016 10:10:02 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] [IMP] getting_started: grammar Closes #184 --- getting_started/documentation.rst | 22 +++++++++++----------- locale/sources/getting_started.pot | 14 +++++++------- 2 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-) diff --git a/getting_started/documentation.rst b/getting_started/documentation.rst index 0ddb3c4f1..99848d688 100644 --- a/getting_started/documentation.rst +++ b/getting_started/documentation.rst @@ -301,7 +301,7 @@ progressively, by groups of apps. .. image:: media/getting_started09.png :align: center -The goal of the **Kick-off call** is, for our project manager, to come +The goal of the **Kick-off call** is for our project manager to come to an understanding of your business in order to propose an implementation plan (phasing). Each phase is the deployment of a set applications that you will fully use in production at the end of the @@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ For every phase, the steps are the following: you, validate the business process and configure according to your specific needs. -2. **Data:** are created manually or imported from your existing system. +2. **Data:** created manually or imported from your existing system. You are responsible to export the data from your existing system and Odoo's project manager will import them in Odoo. @@ -371,21 +371,21 @@ You can find more information on how to manage your databases Customer Success ================ -Odoo is passionate about delighting our customers, and ensuring that +Odoo is passionate about delighting our customers and ensuring that they have all the resources needed to complete their project. During the implementation phase, your point of contact is the project -manager, and eventually the support team. +manager and eventually the support team. -Once your are in production, you will probably have less interaction -with your project manager. At that time, we will assign you a member of -our Client Success Team, that is specialized in the long-term -relationship with our customers. He will contact you to showcase new +Once you are in production, you will probably have less interaction +with your project manager. At that time, we will assign a member of +our Client Success Team to you. They are specialized in the long-term +relationship with our customers. They will contact you to showcase new versions, improve the way you work with Odoo, assess your new needs, -etc. +etc... -Our internal goal is to keep a customer at least for 10 years, and offer -them a solution the grows with their needs! +Our internal goal is to keep customers for at least 10 years and offer +them a solution that grows with their needs! Welcome aboard and enjoy your Odoo experience! diff --git a/locale/sources/getting_started.pot b/locale/sources/getting_started.pot index e304d01ac..bd7e455c6 100644 --- a/locale/sources/getting_started.pot +++ b/locale/sources/getting_started.pot @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ msgid "" msgstr "" "Project-Id-Version: Odoo Business 9.0\n" "Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: \n" -"POT-Creation-Date: 2016-08-18 10:05+0200\n" +"POT-Creation-Date: 2016-09-07 10:10+0200\n" "PO-Revision-Date: YEAR-MO-DA HO:MI+ZONE\n" "Last-Translator: FULL NAME \n" "Language-Team: LANGUAGE \n" @@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ msgid "After the kick-off meeting, we define a phasing plan to deploy Odoo progr msgstr "" #: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:304 -msgid "The goal of the **Kick-off call** is, for our project manager, to come to an understanding of your business in order to propose an implementation plan (phasing). Each phase is the deployment of a set applications that you will fully use in production at the end of the phase." +msgid "The goal of the **Kick-off call** is for our project manager to come to an understanding of your business in order to propose an implementation plan (phasing). Each phase is the deployment of a set applications that you will fully use in production at the end of the phase." msgstr "" #: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:310 @@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ msgid "**On Boarding:** Odoo's project manager will review Odoo's business flows msgstr "" #: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:317 -msgid "**Data:** are created manually or imported from your existing system. You are responsible to export the data from your existing system and Odoo's project manager will import them in Odoo." +msgid "**Data:** created manually or imported from your existing system. You are responsible to export the data from your existing system and Odoo's project manager will import them in Odoo." msgstr "" #: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:321 @@ -398,19 +398,19 @@ msgid "Customer Success" msgstr "" #: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:374 -msgid "Odoo is passionate about delighting our customers, and ensuring that they have all the resources needed to complete their project." +msgid "Odoo is passionate about delighting our customers and ensuring that they have all the resources needed to complete their project." msgstr "" #: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:377 -msgid "During the implementation phase, your point of contact is the project manager, and eventually the support team." +msgid "During the implementation phase, your point of contact is the project manager and eventually the support team." msgstr "" #: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:380 -msgid "Once your are in production, you will probably have less interaction with your project manager. At that time, we will assign you a member of our Client Success Team, that is specialized in the long-term relationship with our customers. He will contact you to showcase new versions, improve the way you work with Odoo, assess your new needs, etc." +msgid "Once you are in production, you will probably have less interaction with your project manager. At that time, we will assign a member of our Client Success Team to you. They are specialized in the long-term relationship with our customers. They will contact you to showcase new versions, improve the way you work with Odoo, assess your new needs, etc..." msgstr "" #: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:387 -msgid "Our internal goal is to keep a customer at least for 10 years, and offer them a solution the grows with their needs!" +msgid "Our internal goal is to keep customers for at least 10 years and offer them a solution that grows with their needs!" msgstr "" #: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:390