[IMP] maintain: odoo online database management

task-2995394

closes odoo/documentation#5002

X-original-commit: c6e6401e36
Signed-off-by: Xavier Platteau (xpl) <xpl@odoo.com>

content/administration/maintain/odoo_online.rst

@@ -2,25 +2,15 @@
 Odoo Online database management
 ===============================
 
-To manage a database, sign in to https://www.odoo.com and access the `database management page
-<https://www.odoo.com/my/databases>`_ by clicking on the user icon, then on
-:guilabel:`My Databases`.
+To manage a database, go to the `database manager <https://www.odoo.com/my/databases>`_ and sign in
+as the database administrator.
 
-.. image:: odoo_online/my-databases.png
-   :align: center
-   :alt: Clicking on the user icon opens a drop-down menu. "My databases" button is highlighted.
+All the main database management options are available by clicking the database name, except the
+upgrade option, which can be accessed by clicking the **arrow in a circle** icon next to the
+database name. It is only displayed if an upgrade is available.
 
-.. note::
-   Make sure to connect as the administrator of the database that changes will be made on.
-
-.. image:: odoo_online/dropdown-menu.png
-   :align: right
-   :alt: Clicking on the gear icon opens the drop-down menu.
-
-Open the drop-down menu next to the database that changes will be made on by clicking on the gear
-icon.
-
-Several actions are available:
+.. image:: odoo_online/database-manager.png
+   :alt: Accessing the database management options
 
 - :ref:`odoo_online/upgrade`
 - :ref:`odoo_online/duplicate`
@@ -37,39 +27,24 @@ Several actions are available:
 Upgrade
 =======
 
-If the database is *not* on the latest **Online version**, the administrator should receive an
-invitation to :doc:`upgrade <../upgrade>` the database. A :guilabel:`Rolling Release`` button on the
-database's main screen proposes an upgrade to the latest version (e.g., 14.0 to 16.1).
-
-.. important::
-   - | **If the Odoo database's version is lower than the latest major release:**
-     | The database must be upgraded within two months. After these two months, an automatic
-       upgrade is initiated.
-   - | **If the Odoo database's version is equal to or higher than the latest major release:**
-     | Disregard the invitation to upgrade as the database probably wouldn't benefit from new
-       features every two months.
-
-.. note::
-   Versions that are not supported anymore become deprecated and need to be updated to avoid
-   security issues. Odoo recommends that the company initiate the upgrade, as this method allows for
-   the company to request a test upgrade of the database to check for any discrepancies.
+Trigger a database upgrade.
 
 .. seealso::
-   - :doc:`../upgrade`
-   - :doc:`supported_versions`
+   For more information about the upgrade process, check out the :doc:`Odoo Online upgrade
+   documentation <../upgrade/odoo_online>`.
 
 .. _odoo_online/duplicate:
 
 Duplicate
 =========
 
-This allows to make an exact copy of the database to be able to perform testing without compromising
-the daily operations.
+Create an exact copy of the database, which can be used to perform testing without compromising
+daily operations.
 
 .. important::
-   - By checking :guilabel:`For testing purposes`, all external communication (emails, payments,
-     delivery orders, etc.) are disabled by default on the duplicated database.
-   - Duplicate databases expire automatically after 15 days.
+   - By checking :guilabel:`For testing purposes`, all external actions (emails, payments, delivery
+     orders, etc.) are disabled by default on the duplicated database.
+   - Duplicated databases expire automatically after 15 days.
 
 .. _odoo_online/rename:
 
@@ -83,28 +58,31 @@ Rename the database and its URL.
 Download
 ========
 
-Instantly download a ZIP file with a backup of the database.
+Download a ZIP file containing a backup of the database.
 
 .. note::
-   Databases are backed up daily according to the `Odoo Cloud SLA
+   Databases are backed up daily as per the `Odoo Cloud Hosting SLA
    <https://www.odoo.com/cloud-sla>`_.
 
 .. _odoo_online/domains:
 
-Domains
-=======
+Domain names
+============
 
-Configure custom domains to access the database via another URL.
+Use a custom :doc:`domain name <domain_names>` to access the database via another URL.
 
-.. seealso::
-   - :doc:`domain_names`
+.. tip::
+   You can :ref:`register a domain name for free <domain-name/odoo-register>`.
 
 .. _odoo_online/tags:
 
 Tags
 ====
 
-Add tags to sort your databases out. You can search the tags in the search bar.
+Add tags to easily identify and sort your databases.
+
+.. tip::
+   You can search for tags in the search bar.
 
 .. _odoo_online/delete:
 
@@ -114,44 +92,43 @@ Delete
 Delete a database instantly.
 
 .. danger::
-   Deleting a database means that all data is permanently lost. The deletion is instant and for all
-   users. It is recommended to create a backup of the database before deleting it.
+   Deleting a database means that all data is permanently lost. The deletion is instant and applies
+   to all users. It is recommended to create a backup of the database before deleting it.
 
-Carefully read the warning message that pops up and proceed only if the implications of deleting a
-database are fully understood:
+Carefully read the warning message and only proceed if the implications of deleting a database are
+fully understood.
 
 .. image:: odoo_online/delete.png
-   :align: center
-   :alt: A warning message is prompted before deleting a database.
+   :alt: The warning message displayed before deleting a database
 
 .. note::
    - Only an administrator can delete a database.
-   - The database name is immediately available for a new database.
-   - It is not possible to delete a database if it is expired or linked to a subscription. If
-     needed, please get in touch with `Odoo Support <https://www.odoo.com/help>`_.
+   - The database name is immediately made available to anyone.
+   - Deleting a database if it has expired or is linked to a subscription is impossible. In that
+     case, contact `Odoo Support <https://www.odoo.com/help>`_.
 
 .. _odoo_online/contact-support:
 
-Contact Support
-===============
+Contact us
+==========
 
-Access the Odoo `support page <https://www.odoo.com/help>`_ with your database's details already
+Access the `Odoo.com support page <https://www.odoo.com/help>`_ with the database's details already
 pre-filled.
 
 .. _odoo_online/users:
 
-Invite / Remove Users
+Invite / remove users
 =====================
 
-To invite users, fill out the email address of the new user and click on :guilabel:`Invite`. To add
-multiple users, click on :guilabel:`Add more users`.
+To invite users, fill out the new user's email address and click :guilabel:`Invite`. To add multiple
+users, click :guilabel:`Add more users`.
 
 .. image:: odoo_online/invite-users.png
-   :align: center
-   :alt: Clicking on "Add more users" adds additional email fields.
+   :alt: Inviting a user on a database
 
-To remove users, select the users to remove and click on :guilabel:`Remove`.
+To remove users, select them and click :guilabel:`Remove`.
 
 .. seealso::
-   - :doc:`/applications/general/users/manage_users`
-   - :doc:`/applications/general/users/delete_account`
+   - :doc:`../../applications/general/users/manage_users`
+   - :doc:`../../applications/general/users/delete_account`
+

content/administration/upgrade/odoo_online.rst

@@ -13,6 +13,25 @@ icon next to the database name, indicating that the database can be upgraded.
    :align: center
    :alt: The database manager page with an upgrade button next to the name of a database.
 
+.. important::
+   - If the database's version is **lower** than the latest major release: the database must be
+     upgraded within two months. After these two months, an automatic upgrade is initiated.
+   - If the database's version is **equal** to or **higher** than the latest major release:
+     you can disregard the invitation to upgrade, as the database probably would not benefit from
+     new features every two months.
+
+If a database is *not* on the latest online version, its administrator should receive an invitation
+to upgrade on the database's dashboard, displayed as an **arrow in a circle**.
+
+.. image:: odoo_online/database-notification.png
+   :alt: Invitation to upgrade on the database dashboard.
+
+.. note::
+   Versions that are not supported anymore become deprecated and must be updated to avoid
+   security issues. It is recommended to initiate the upgrade yourself and not wait for the
+   automatic upgrade, as the former method allows you to request a test upgrade of the database to
+   check for any discrepancies.
+
 Test database
 =============
 
@@ -65,5 +84,9 @@ Select the :guilabel:`Production` option and then click :guilabel:`Upgrade` to b
 process. As before, a notification email is sent to the email address provided and a red
 :guilabel:`Upgrade in progress` tag appears next to the name of the database.
 
+The production database is then taken offline and will be upgraded automatically. The time it takes
+to upgrade the production database should be similar to the time that was necessary to upgrade the
+test database. Make sure to inform database users of the scheduled downtime.
+
 After the upgrade is finished, the :guilabel:`Upgrade in progress` tag disappears and the database
 is upgraded to the version specified.