From 8da826d9440c826072f76b1fad1d222610e322e0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Louis Baudoux Date: Fri, 3 Nov 2023 12:49:15 +0100 Subject: [PATCH] [IMP] iap: move from first-person to second-person writing For some reason, the first-person was used throughout the IAP documentation, and quite inconsistently. As the rest of the documentation is using second-person writing, IAP should be no exception. closes odoo/documentation#6286 X-original-commit: 8d0ae3b5df4e7f10bb5493a600dfc733dd38eefa Signed-off-by: Antoine Vandevenne (anv) Signed-off-by: Louis Baudoux (lba) --- .../applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst | 32 +++++++------------ 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-) diff --git a/content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst b/content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst index 9f511e291..b2f00d4ba 100644 --- a/content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst +++ b/content/applications/general/in_app_purchase.rst @@ -3,20 +3,20 @@ In-App Purchase (IAP) ===================== In-App Purchases (IAP) gives access to additional services through Odoo. For instance, it allows you -to send SMS Text Messages or to send Invoices by post directly from my database. +to send SMS Text Messages or to send Invoices by post directly from your database. Buying Credits ============== -Each IAP Service relies on prepaid credits to work and has its own pricing. To consult my current -balance or to recharge my account, go to :menuselection:`Settings --> Odoo IAP --> View my +Each IAP Service relies on prepaid credits to work and has its own pricing. To consult your current +balance or to recharge your account, go to :menuselection:`Settings --> Odoo IAP --> View my Services`. .. image:: in_app_purchase/image1.png :align: center .. tip:: - If I am on Odoo Online and have the Enterprise version, I benefit from free credits to test our + If you are on Odoo Online and have the Enterprise version, you benefit from free credits to test our IAP features. IAP accounts @@ -37,9 +37,9 @@ Settings --> IAP Account`. IAP Portal ========== -The IAP Portal is a platform regrouping my IAP Services. It is accessible from -:menuselection:`Settings app --> Odoo IAP --> View my Services`. From there, I can view my current -balance, recharge my credits, review my consumption and set a reminder to when credits are low. +The IAP Portal is a platform regrouping your IAP Services. It is accessible from +:menuselection:`Settings app --> Odoo IAP --> View my Services`. From there, you can view your current +balance, recharge your credits and set a reminder when your balance falls below a threshold. .. image:: in_app_purchase/image3.png :align: center @@ -47,21 +47,11 @@ balance, recharge my credits, review my consumption and set a reminder to when c Get notified when credits are low ================================= -To be notified when it’s time to recharge my credits, I’ll go to my IAP Portal through -:menuselection:`Settings app --> Odoo IAP --> View my Services`, unfold a service and mark the -Receive threshold warning option. Then, I’ll provide a minimum amount of credits and email -addresses. Now, every time that the limit is reached, an automatic reminder will be sent to by +To be notified when it’s time to recharge your credits, you can go to your IAP Portal through +:menuselection:`Settings app --> Odoo IAP --> View my Services`, unfold a service and check the +Receive threshold warning option. Then, you can provide a minimum amount of credits and email +addresses. Now, every time that the limit is reached, an automatic reminder will be sent by email! .. image:: in_app_purchase/image4.png :align: center - -IAP services available -====================== - -Different services are available depending on the hosting type of your Database: - -- *Odoo Online*: only the IAP services provided by Odoo can be used (i.e. the SMS, Snailmail, - Reveal and Partner Autocomplete features); -- *Odoo.sh and Odoo Enterprise (on-premise)*: both the services provided by Odoo and by third-party - apps can be used.