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The goal of the **Kick-off call** is, for our project manager, to come
The goal of the **Kick-off call** is for our project manager to come
to an understanding of your business in order to propose an
implementation plan (phasing). Each phase is the deployment of a set
applications that you will fully use in production at the end of the
@ -314,7 +314,7 @@ For every phase, the steps are the following:
you, validate the business process and configure according to
your specific needs.
2. **Data:** are created manually or imported from your existing system.
2. **Data:** created manually or imported from your existing system.
You are responsible to export the data from your existing system
and Odoo's project manager will import them in Odoo.
@ -371,21 +371,21 @@ You can find more information on how to manage your databases
Customer Success
================
Odoo is passionate about delighting our customers, and ensuring that
Odoo is passionate about delighting our customers and ensuring that
they have all the resources needed to complete their project.
During the implementation phase, your point of contact is the project
manager, and eventually the support team.
manager and eventually the support team.
Once your are in production, you will probably have less interaction
with your project manager. At that time, we will assign you a member of
our Client Success Team, that is specialized in the long-term
relationship with our customers. He will contact you to showcase new
Once you are in production, you will probably have less interaction
with your project manager. At that time, we will assign a member of
our Client Success Team to you. They are specialized in the long-term
relationship with our customers. They will contact you to showcase new
versions, improve the way you work with Odoo, assess your new needs,
etc.
etc...
Our internal goal is to keep a customer at least for 10 years, and offer
them a solution the grows with their needs!
Our internal goal is to keep customers for at least 10 years and offer
them a solution that grows with their needs!
Welcome aboard and enjoy your Odoo experience!

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@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ msgid ""
msgstr ""
"Project-Id-Version: Odoo Business 9.0\n"
"Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: \n"
"POT-Creation-Date: 2016-08-18 10:05+0200\n"
"POT-Creation-Date: 2016-09-07 10:10+0200\n"
"PO-Revision-Date: YEAR-MO-DA HO:MI+ZONE\n"
"Last-Translator: FULL NAME <EMAIL@ADDRESS>\n"
"Language-Team: LANGUAGE <LL@li.org>\n"
@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ msgid "After the kick-off meeting, we define a phasing plan to deploy Odoo progr
msgstr ""
#: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:304
msgid "The goal of the **Kick-off call** is, for our project manager, to come to an understanding of your business in order to propose an implementation plan (phasing). Each phase is the deployment of a set applications that you will fully use in production at the end of the phase."
msgid "The goal of the **Kick-off call** is for our project manager to come to an understanding of your business in order to propose an implementation plan (phasing). Each phase is the deployment of a set applications that you will fully use in production at the end of the phase."
msgstr ""
#: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:310
@ -350,7 +350,7 @@ msgid "**On Boarding:** Odoo's project manager will review Odoo's business flows
msgstr ""
#: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:317
msgid "**Data:** are created manually or imported from your existing system. You are responsible to export the data from your existing system and Odoo's project manager will import them in Odoo."
msgid "**Data:** created manually or imported from your existing system. You are responsible to export the data from your existing system and Odoo's project manager will import them in Odoo."
msgstr ""
#: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:321
@ -398,19 +398,19 @@ msgid "Customer Success"
msgstr ""
#: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:374
msgid "Odoo is passionate about delighting our customers, and ensuring that they have all the resources needed to complete their project."
msgid "Odoo is passionate about delighting our customers and ensuring that they have all the resources needed to complete their project."
msgstr ""
#: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:377
msgid "During the implementation phase, your point of contact is the project manager, and eventually the support team."
msgid "During the implementation phase, your point of contact is the project manager and eventually the support team."
msgstr ""
#: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:380
msgid "Once your are in production, you will probably have less interaction with your project manager. At that time, we will assign you a member of our Client Success Team, that is specialized in the long-term relationship with our customers. He will contact you to showcase new versions, improve the way you work with Odoo, assess your new needs, etc."
msgid "Once you are in production, you will probably have less interaction with your project manager. At that time, we will assign a member of our Client Success Team to you. They are specialized in the long-term relationship with our customers. They will contact you to showcase new versions, improve the way you work with Odoo, assess your new needs, etc..."
msgstr ""
#: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:387
msgid "Our internal goal is to keep a customer at least for 10 years, and offer them a solution the grows with their needs!"
msgid "Our internal goal is to keep customers for at least 10 years and offer them a solution that grows with their needs!"
msgstr ""
#: ../../getting_started/documentation.rst:390